Jewel (OC) Police Line Pin Up

This was interesting and fun in the making.
Using the same line width as I use in the comic/manga version (5px), but blended when finalizing.
Should I open a commission with this style? :D

Software : @Clip Studio Paint (Manga Studio)
Tablet : Wacom Bamboo CTH-460
HD Version : http://ronggo.deviantart.com/art/Jewel-O-C-Police-Line-Pin-Up-666774837